Friday, 4 September 2015

Little Red Riding Hood

We have been learning to use present participles in our writing.
Skipping through a creepy dark forest, Little Red Riding Hood was going to her grandmother’s house. She was dropping off some goodies for her grandmother who was very ill.
Lurking through the bushes, Little Red Riding Hood was frightened because someone was there. “Ummm, who's there?” she called. Something very tall was looking at her. That something had red eyes. 
“Who’s there? Stop staring at me,” cried Little Red Riding Hood. 
The thing disappeared. 
Skipping along the path, she heard a tree whisper to her. It sounded like the tree whispered, “Danger will be upon you.” 
A tree shook. The thing came back to haunt her. Suddenly, a wolf appeared. 
“Please don't hurt me. 
“Hello,” the wolf said in a deep voice. 
“Hello.” 
“Where are you going?” 
"I’m going to my grandmother’s house on top of that hill." 
“Okay, now bye bye.” 
When Little Red Riding Hood knocked on the door at her grandmother’s house, her grandmother’s voice sounded deep. “Come in dear.’’ 
When Little Red Riding Hood came in, she realized that it was the wolf. “Get out! Where is my grandmother?” 
“I’m going to eat you,” said the wolf.  
Little Red Riding Hood opened the closet door and found her grandmother all tied up. “Little Red Riding Hood,” said her grandmother. 
A man came in and broke the door. The man killed the wolf. They lived happily ever after.

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