Monday, 27 July 2015

A Magic Morning

We have been learning to use personification in our writing. 
Jed my dog woke me up. It was a cold and dark morning. I was seeing if Mummy and Daddy weren't awake. No one was awake. It was Mummy’s day off. I wanted to go play in the frosty snow. I think Elsa came and made the snow.
I looked out my window and saw shimmering snowflakes sprinkling in the sky slowly. I had to wipe the ice off my window. I vanished into the kitchen. Something strange was going on. My cat, Sooty, was sleeping on the table and……………. There was another cat in the house. I was shocked. It was the next door neighbour's cat. Sooty wouldn’t like that. I ran to the door and opened it, then I chased the cat everywhere until it went out of the door. “That was fun,” I said to myself. 
Sooty woke up. “Good morning Sooty,” I said. Sooty said good morning back to me. He meows when he says good morning.
I ran into Mummy and Daddy’s room to see if  I could go outside. Mummy said only if I got into a nice winter jacket. I ran like lightning.

Monday, 20 July 2015

Winter

It was an icy peaceful morning. I saw heaps of sparkling snowflakes shimmering in the sky. I saw a lonely tree iced like crystal icicles. I was building a snowman and having a snow fight with my  sister and brother.